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I stood there watching the Sunset,and the vastness of it.How beautiful it was,with all the different colors.I had my headphones to my MP3 player in my ears,as I listened to Diary of Jane by Breaking Benjamin.My friends,well my used to be friends walked up,they didn't notice me,they were all just having fun.In one of my hands there was a sword,a big one.I stared out over the sunset,and then I launched myself off of the cliff,to where my enemy was.There was a silent laugh,and then I collided with him,he knocked me backwards in the air,and my headphones fell out.I could still hear the music,it was as if it was in me.I gave a scream,and then I flipped around in the air,and turned to face him.He came,flying towards me,I didn't have time to think,I swung my sword around and it collided with his.We kept swinging it around,trying to get the other one,then he threw me back on the cliff,and that's when my used to be friends stopped,and just stared at me.I was on the ground,my head was looking up,and my brown eyes now seemed black.My music had started over on that song,and a growl was forming in my throat.From human to Demon,I had transformed.The elements swirling around my body,I got to my feet,and he looked back at me and laughed "Not done yet." My eyes were glazed with fury,and anger,it was all rolling into me.All the memories I have had,they were sweeping through my mind,like a tornado sweeping the land.I stood there,with my sword in one hand hanging down,and I said "Your the one who's done." With that I did a rolling flip off the cliff,and into him,the person that was my brother,who wanted to destroy me.The air was knocked out of him,and then we both started to fall.There was no scream of terror,you could only hear,the knocking of our swords stopping the other ones attack.His wings wrapped around,me and he fle wup into the air,and when he was above the cliff,he let go and his hand grabbed my throat.My head was back looking up at the sky.He said "You should have stopped along time ago,and now it ends here."
I closed my eyes,and then I screamed as he sword went plunging through my body.He le go of me,and I fell back to earth,and landed almost on my feet.I fell to the ground,and behind me there was a scream,and my sister lurched forward,screaming "Rayne." I heard my name,but it didn't register to my mind,I was in y own world then.I felt her hands,Talli's hands on me,I felt her tears washing over me,but I felt no pain.It just felt as if the waves were washing over me,covering my body to hide me from the blood...my blood.I heard her screaming,and then I looked up,I looked up into his eyes.His hazel eyes were looking down on me,and there I saw a tear,and he lunged toward me and embraced me in a hug,and he whispered in y ear "I'm sorry Rayne we never should have doubted you."
Then there weere my brothers eyes,boring into me,as my hands were across my stomach.I got up,and then was covered in a black fire.I stood up,and I said "If it is my end,then it shall be your end to." I raised my sword,and jumped off the cliff,plunging my sword into his.His eyes rolled to the back of his head,and then he fell.His wings faltering,and then I fell to.Talli was on her knee's on the cliff,she was crawling forward quickly,her arm reached down,and then there was "RAYNE."
Tears followed after that,As I fell.My eyes closed,as I plunged head first to earth,it seemed so slow.The sunset was just looking at me,it's beauty shedding tears for my life.Then I heard a scream,but it was mine.I let my arms go out,I arched my back,and then I hit the ground.No pain shot through my body,I felt nothing,but I was still alive.I was watching hte last rays of light,through my eyes,and I reliazed I was going to be fine.I looked up,and there hovering over me,was a bird.It was an eag;e,and it was so beautiful.It nodded it's head once to me,and then disappeared,into dust.I closed my eyes,and as the sunset,and darkness came out,I reliazed that I was never alone in this world.I heard crashing through the forest,and then hands were on me,my sisters.She hugged me,and patted my hair,SHe caressed my cheeks with her hands,but I was gone,I couldn't hear a thing,my heart with it's steady rythm faltered,and for one second I thought I was gonna die.Tears,my tears started to fall.I started to cry.The moon was crying and the whole world was to.The moon is what gave me my strength,and when it was full,it was when I was at my best.I gave up,and slipped into ever lasting darkness,only to be awakened,when the world had called me back to it,when I could be loved,and love without there being darkness.The hands I still felt,and tears washing over my body,I smiled,and whispered "You were my forever,and I gave it up,when you all doubted me." Then there came a whispered back "I'll be there when you wake up." And with that,I was asleep,with the moon watching over me,and my sisters hands holding me.
- by Falling_Blood_Rose |
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- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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- Title: Dreams in the Sunset
- Artist: Falling_Blood_Rose
- Description: This is apart of my book,but I love this part so much I just wanted to put it up for people to read,tell me what ya think.
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: dreams sunset
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Stars_of_Gallifrey_49 - 02/19/2011
- Really, really great. Awesome imagery, but you used the word and a little too much near the beginning.
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- GuardianDarkblade - 02/25/2009
- This... was beyond good. I love the description you've placed in the story, or this part of it. It's truly fantastic, only I wish I knew the rest of the story. However, I've only read a few stories on Gaia, but no one has separated the paragraphs when different people speak.
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- Falling_Blood_Rose - 01/07/2009
- well this was the rough draft of my story,you think I'm going to give you the real deal of it,not when any body could take it.The other one is way different than this.
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- Poppa Wheelie - 01/06/2009
- hmm...it is pretty good...but gets boring fast.
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