Reminiscence -Preface-

• Artist: Namida Aiko Bara
• Description: A story I'm writing I just want to see if other's like it it's only the intro though.
• Date: 08/03/2009
• Tags: reminiscence preface

I just moved a few days ago and hopefully this year I wouldn't be made fun of like every other school I've been in. I've always been different long pure white hair a few inches above my anke, silver eyes, pail skin, short. But they all take looks, personalities should take first place before being quick on critizizing someone, but now I don't know what I am.
After being in a tragic inident long ago and now I'm striked down a few years of my life and
I can't remember much what happened, but I do get flashbacks I'm not sure whether it's
true or not but I don't know it feels to love anymore..... Only so far I just attend to Madoko High School in Japan of course ones again I might not get real friends and just might as well move again though I know it's not the right thing to run away from things.

Comments

[Rayven Mondo Bernal]

i like it but you need some more puncuation and your good. but other then that. 5.
and im doing the same too. if you want look me up and rate my prologe and tell me wat you think of it