The night I should regret.

• Artist: AmberxeyedxAngel
• Description: A poem about the night I spent at the house of a guy i liked and how I felt the next day at my friends house waiting for my mom to come get me.
• Date: 08/27/2008
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crying Rocking on her front porch staring at the tree
my heart went to and fro as I thought of me
was it wrong of me to like him thus making me sad
I wanted more than sex but is a fling so badthe sky mocked my sorrow with the falling rain
each drop upon the sidewalk echoed my heart's pain
that night was somewhat special or so I felt
the morning was a nightmare that to my hope was dealt
can I let him have me body but not heart
or will the simple pleasure of flesh tear me apart
he doesn't even like me but wants me none the less
sometimes I feel my life is nothing but a test
and if so am I failing because I'd pretend
that I was okay with benefits plus friends? crying

Comments

[Buttstealer]

yeah sounds like me..i know how you feel...

[Jackiechan8202]

not bad i like it

[~Sukiami-hojo~]

You should have comas at the end of the lines but still good!

[~OmaLuna~]

not bad but a bit dark!