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• Artist: II-iAzn Cookeh-II
• Description: A little something that I wrote when I felt lonely and couldn't find a solution to a relationship problem.
• Date: 02/13/2009
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The world may seem unfair and deadly.
The world may have horrid pasts.
but I asure you,
There is more good than bad.
You look out the window and what do you see.
A clear blue sky with winged-creatures.
And here you sit,
Admiring their ways.
You could be flying along with them.
If only you could.
You sit here a wingless creature,
Felling useless and betrayed.
You soon spot another someone
Feeling the same way.
You are a wide width apart
Hoping to reach them.
But figure out the closer you go,
The farther you get.
You may be heading ahead.
But their face gets smaller and smaller.
You wonder if
Will you ever find that someone
You've searched the world and beyond.
You've came close but gave in.
Now you see another one.
About to steal your heart
And then crush it into the ground.
You wish you were up there,
Along with the birds.
Flying and soaring so freely.
You want your wings to spread as well
But the question is...
Will they ever...?

Comments

[JuiicyFruiit]

i feel like ur telling 2 stories at once.
not that thats bad or anything.
u'll probably need to focus on one thing at a time.

[Formosus Aestas]

None of the "extra layers" that characterize poetry.