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I see her...
I rest my weary eyes and sigh with relief.
She stands and smiles at me.
I move foward in Disbelief.
I open my eyes again as I move closer and closer.
"You came back to me?" I asked her.
She extends her hand as if to anwser me.
I raise my hand and press it against her soft warm hand.
I felt a strange emotion.
Is there something I can't See?
The heat from her is gone shortly after.
I look down at my hand that is inclosed in hers.
Ugly,burnt, and crippled fingers embrace her hand.
I pull back, frightened and begin looking down at myself.
My body replaced with tormentive bones.
I feel myself Decaying every second.
I stumble backwards and fall over.
I Stare up at her.
She was gone...
I cry towards the sky but all there is a void.
Surrounded in Darkness.
- by Crimson Kurama |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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- Title: Disbelief
- Artist: Crimson Kurama
- Description: .....
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: darkness decayingself
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Comments (4 Comments)
- violet_rampage - 08/30/2009
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wow..wish i could post a menta image..
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- firetasteslikebacon - 08/30/2009
- "Surrounded in Darkness" sounds a bit cliche. I recommend that take it out because the poem sounds better if it ended on "I cry towards the sky but all there is a void."
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- xXxOrGAZZmic_ObsessionxXx - 08/30/2009
- thers a story behind these words arent ther? something that you wer so happy to hav and then in the next secound wer gone. i like it. it reminds me of a part in my life. +5
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- NathyMm - 08/28/2009
- i like thiz poem..i feel like i understand wat ur saying..
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