Teen Suicide Poem

• Artist: sushi-boy97
• Description: It's a teen suicide poem.Did it as a school project.Please give me your honest opinion.
  P.S.- try to give a title to this poem I can't think of anything.
• Date: 12/29/2011
• Tags: teen suicide poem

I feel as if I'm drowning in a sea of agony.
Hatred is every where I go.
Rejected by friends.
Disowned by family.
Scars which crawl up my arms.
I just
I just can't deal with this any longer.
Maybe
just maybe
I should do what THEY say.
An orange container will be my gate way to
the Asphodel Meadows.
Gulp.
Let HIM
judge my acts.
Instead of ya'll.

Comments

[FoxyXNinja]

I think Maybe would be a good title
Nice poem by the way, I'm glad this wasn't about your suicidal thoughts xD