I haven't posted for a long time so I'm gonna make up a story right now and see if i can expand it every time i get on i will read the post before and attempt to write a story on here sound good? oh and PLEASE read if i get bored enough when i finally finish it i will post it in a thread m'kay?
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We will begin where every story of bravery and fortune begins.... THE BEGINNING which just so happens to begin with. Once upon a time. no don't worry children I wont make this one up it will be one about me when I was a young adventurer does that sound exciting? Okay well one day I was walking around town because I was sent to go buy some food for dinner when I heard something in an alleyway that shouldn't be happening in a peaceful town like ours. the thing I had heard was a scream followed by "GET BACK HERE!"
"get away from me you creep!"
"no no NO! if you leave this alleyway...."
"what are you gonna do you cant hit me from this far and everyone will see you."
"that may be true but I WILL see you again this is a small town and I won't be as nice next time"
So with that I decided to step in.
"Hey mister. You need to leave her alone."
"mind your own business squirt."
"I will tell you once again dont lay a hand on this lady.. EVER if I hear from her that you have I will report you"
"ya and if you do I will find you when I get out"
"fine by me I'll be waiting. come on let's go"
Now now children not all stories start out exciting you will have to show patience for this one.
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I apologize for the quality of this story I decided to try something new I never do narrative and I'm not very good at the none narrative in my opinion so sorry again but please respond on what needs working on and what you liked or if you liked anything but please don't be TO harsh i did say i was trying something new heart yall *don't worry K your DEFINITELY #1*
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