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-chews on bamboo stick- Hello. ^-^ Welcome to my Panda-ish journal. This is where I write my stories, life, and mostly RaNdOm ThInGs~ COOKIES!!! Enjoy~ Oh, and~ -whispers in your ear- I love random PMs and comments~ ^-^
Chapter 2=Onee-chan?
I rubbed my eyes to see if I was seeing things. But when I opened my eyes she was there still smiling. She looked just like me.

"Momo...come here. Please."

Momo put down the plate of snacks. Everybody had came to the house. They were in a different room. Momo walked over and turned to me.

"What is it Rai.?"

My eyes narrowed on the girl and I pointed to the tree where the girl was there. "

"Is that your friend Rai?"

"No.."

The girl smiled and she took a step forward and disappeared. I flinched and the little gear was behind me.

"Rai has to come home now. Now."

The girl pulled on my kimono, and once she pulled on my kimono my body froze and I wasn't in control of my self. She pulled me down to her level and she grabbed my face as a mother would. Caressing my cheeks.

Momo was in a shock state.

"HITSUGAYA-KUN!!! HELP! RAI, RAI!!!!!"

Momo tried to yank me and the girl apart but there was a barrier between us. She couldn't get through. My eyes became dull red. I couldn't move, had no control of my body.

I could hear everybody getting up and tripping over things making their way to where Mom and I were. Momo was crying everybody was trying to break the barrier.

"Rai. Lets go home together. With everyone."

"Home..?"

"RAI IS ALREADY HOME! DON'T TAKE RAI AWAY FROM MOMO OR US!!!! LET HER GO!!!" Hitsugaya yelled.

This is really happening? It is. I'm kneeling and a little girl that looks like me is taing over my body. NO! I won't take this!

"LET ME GO!" I yelled breaking the barrier between me and the girl.

I slammed back to the tree. (wow I flew out far. XD)

Mom ran to me by my side trying get me up. But the next thing that happened wasn't what I thought would happen. The trees roots wrapped around me and made me sink into the tree.

"RAI!!!!!" Momo yelled crying. She was pulling I struggled to break free. But nothing.

"MOMO!!! HOTSUGAYA!! EVERYONE!!!"

Matsumoto lunged at the tree but the roots pushed me forward still wrapped around me and putting me in front of Matsumoto. My eyes widened. Matsumoto was too late to stop. Her sword had been dug into my shoulder.

I yelled in pain. Making everyone more angerier and more afraid. Momo was crying, you can tell her eyes become wider and they were becoming dull. The little girl you see appeared in front of me and slid her hand down my shoulder where the blood was gushing out and licked it.

"Your blood is most delicious. I guess they were right about you." The girl said.

She turned to everyone.

"If you're wanting to know who I am. I am Suzumiya Haruka." (Last, First)
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((Her eyes are red, she has the same kimono as mine. (read Chapter 1 if you must. Her hair is the same)

"You b***h! If you don't let Rai go I'm gonna kill you!" Renji yelled.

Haruka smirked and lift my face with her hands and stared at the others.

"Do what you must. It's not me you're gonna kill."

She shoves me out front . I was panting from the loss of blood. My vision was blurry. I could still see Momo she was standing there her head down. With a little of my strength left I said one thing before passing out.

"Momo...."

That was the end. everything was blacked out. I was in my little world.

"Momo lets go!" I could hear myself singing that.

"Rai wait up~" That was Momo's voice. She as happy.

Then everything blacked out again. This time Momo was alone crying calling out my name.

"MOMO! I'M RIGHT HERE! MOMO!!!"

My eyes shot open and stood up straight panting.

"A dream...?"

I looked around. This wasn't my room. It was a lab. I was in bed with things connected to me. Before I could even blink there were people at the door smirking as they saw me awake. I had a feeling that this wasn't going to be good.

((Tell me if this one sucked. I'm pretty sure the other one was....I mean it didn't make sense. Well..I gotta fix tmy mistakes. - . -))


I luff avi art. Draw me? I'll draw back. :3 And I tip. wink

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  • User Comments: [2]
    DYoda
    Community Member





    Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 01:46pm


    Wow, I really do suck at writing...
    This story is amazing!
    And confusing...
    But still amazing!
    Great job! Keep up the good work!

    ~DYoda


    Dsdude
    Community Member





    Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 07:02pm


    oops-i left my commetn on the previos one in black not white hehe


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