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The Beach
a poem i wrote
The Beach

The beach is like the ever ending life
it begins and it ends sometimes with a knife
the sand is cool and smooth
just like the way i move

The sun comes down and makes a image
like when a painter sees an image of hope
this is wat the beach is like
it like when u ride a bike

the beach is quite and calm
like the way sway of the palm
the hot sun beating on you
just like the morning dew

the beach is were i liked to be
were the sunsets is beutiful to see
the wave crash against the sand
as it was in a band






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Sweet yuki15
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 03:33am
I love it 4laugh


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 02, 2008 @ 12:58am
Not bad... I really like it. 3nodding 4laugh



xoPandako0kiesox
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