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Marriage is a Promise... (Marriage is a Promise written by:The Black Angel of Chaosx) (Dedicated to my Ex-Girl Friend)(I'll always rember you...always) No I don't blame you for leaving me No I don't blame you for stealing my heart After all I am a worthless disgracful nobody and after all you are a perfect beatiful angel The one who I will love and cherish forever My everything,my heroin,the love of my life The one who makes all my dreams come true The one who makes me actualy feel happy So right now I'll give you anything if you just stand by me and hold my hand...

Posted by: The Black Angel of Chaosx Mon Mar 17, 2008 @ 05:59am

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The Black Angel of Chaosx
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Commented on: Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 05:06am


	Please if you see this poem I want your thoughts about it....i want to read them...Please comment 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding

Commented on: Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 05:21am


	Thats really good!!!!! heart

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Commented on: Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 08:41pm


	I don't under stand poetry so i dunno what to say but I don't like the fact that you cut yourself down. Even if its a poem its still sad to think you think that. Hope you feel better.

Commented on: Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 09:28pm


	Thanks for your oppinon x Crissi HiME x 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding I don't know why I like to write poems like where its all depressing especialy to me.... Im not really depressed in real life though but thanks both of you!!! heart heart heart (and please more people comment here!!!)

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Commented on: Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 12:13am


	Awww cry its awasoume but sad

Commented on: Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 12:50am


	it's good ^-^ i like it alot! and yah it is depressing but that's what really bring out a poem, and yah you already know i like to write stuff like this alot too, too bad i have no idea where all of it is haha but yah good job tho blaugh and even tho you told me it doesn't mean anything, can't help but think it does, and i'm sorry sad probably just the fact that when someone reads something like that, either they get sad too, or it really draws them in, i know it drawed me in o.o heh, but that's a good thing, ^-^ yep.. Your average hyper active short asian girl ^-^ [my best friend - left, me - right lol]

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Commented on: Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 08:10pm


	That's so sad... hugs you It'll be ok. I wish that I could write poems to one of my friends, but when I do, I just scare him and make him feel uncomfortable...

Commented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 02:42am


	Awww....that would be deep if ur ex read it......kinda sad though cry ya shouldn't put yaself away like that u know

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Commented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 03:16am


	pretty good.

Commented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 04:26am


	Thanks everyone else who commented...Im glad to see that my emotions and other thoughts actually got across to you readers...(If you did'nt feel anything then I really didnt do a good job in expressing my self I guess)... Anyway please Comment some more ^ ^

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Commented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 12:04am


	This is really... quite kind. It isn't angry at all, which is what I'd expect a peom about an Ex often says. Though I wonder, if you're being to hard on yourself? I don't know the details, so I can't judge, but I think you're a good person. ^_^

Commented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 12:54am


	I think you did a very good job. It's very pretty. You shouldn't put yourself down so much though. crying

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Commented on: Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 03:59am


	Its good and sorta sad at the same time.

Commented on: Thu Apr 03, 2008 @ 01:21pm


	Thank You Everybody else who posted a comment!!!! I wish the person who the poem was writen for would come and post here... sad Anyway please post some more....XD

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