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Poetry. A new unit in school that we're learning about. I don't exactly Hate poetry, but I'm not a poetry freak. Anyway, we have to write ten of our own poems. The minute my teacher said that, a poem was forming in my head. Here's what I have so far: Note: this is taken from my brother's perspective.

Title: Hey There Sis'
I sit in the dark corner, alone.
Head and body faced to the pale beigh wall.
Nearly three o'clock, I begin to wonder,
where she is, is she walking down the street
right know?As I wait?
While asking these questions, a key turns in the door.
A foot steps in, size six or more.
She comes inside, stares at me, her cold, brown eyes,
filled with bliss.
I stare politely. Words escape from my lips.
"Hey there sis'"

In my opinion, it's pretty good. In fact I like it. I like it a lot. Tell me what you think.