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Ok, this is a story I'm writing. Dont judge me too harshly. I'm not that great at writing but I wanted to give it a shot.
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She sat there, bored out of her mind. She originally planned to train but her wolf, Haboshi, had an injured foot so she decided to stay with him. Her name was Kiyumi. She and her family all had the special ability to control the elements. She wore tan shorts with a red shirt and a jade green jacket. As she sat there in her makeshift tent something rustled in the forest. A pair of greedy eyes found their way to Kiyumi’s bag. A bag filled with gold...and lots of it.
“Hhmm, I wonder what I should have for lunch today,” she began to say,” How about some fish, ey Haboshi?” She got up and began to walk towards the creek that was near their campsite. Haboshi attempted to limp after her until Kiyumi scolded him and told him to go lay down. It was his natural instinct to obey so, of course, he did. She reached the edge of the creek and jumped from rock to rock until she was in the middle of the creek. It didn’t have many fish but there were some fish that were large enough to eat. She set her feet in the water and waited for the water to calm down. As she began to spear fish, the pair of greedy eyes made their move.
Just as she speared her third fish, she heard a loud yelp come from the campsite. “Haboshi?” Kiyumi said. She was worried. What if something happened to him? He was too weak and injured to defend himself. She quickly got up and ran to the campsite. Haboshi was lying on his side. It looked like he had been whacked in the face with something heavy. His chest slowly heaved up and down and he let out a small whimper every now and then. Good, she thought to herself, he’s still breathing. She started to jog towards him but she saw someone crouching in her tent. She paused and looked at him for awhile. There was something odd about him. He had red-ish brown eyes that seemed to glow. He wore a torn and ragged cloak with baggy pants. He was carrying a large rock in one hand and a small bag in the other. “Hey!” she shouted, “what do you think you’re doing? That’s my bag!” She pulled an enchanted dagger out of a holster she had on her belt. The dagger was created by the elves and it had elfish writing on the side. Kiyumi lunged towards the man, her weapon ready to attack.

(more to come)