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What Goes On In My Head
-Beneath The Eyes-

Beneath the eyes,
thats where I see
the truth that lies
there waiting for me,
yet what i see
is not but glee
but the truth that
shows you do love me.
As much as it is
the truest as can be
Beneath the eyes,
What do you see?



-As Sure As The Wind-

As Sure As The Wind,
my soul is gone,
beneath the waves
at the break of dawn.
As it seems to shrink
at the bottom of the pit,
i seem to remember
the very same s**t.
My soul i had
to love and to hold
is now at the end
all shrunken and old.
This is a reminder
that time does move on.
As sure as the wind,
they are all finally gone.






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Special Agent Odd
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 21, 2009 @ 06:48pm
Oh, wow, Nico!
I've read all of the poems you've posted so far,
and I love them all!
The sureness, no hesitation,
and the way you seem to take the words from your very core and put them to paper...
I love the way you write!
Check out my profile, there are some of my poems as well~


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 25, 2009 @ 08:03am
Wow they are both amazing.. I love them and your totally amazing at poetry



EmpressMiranda
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