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Unerring Defeat
What happens in my life especially the terrible ones are posted here... Or the story.
Unerring Strife,The Beginning,Chapter 1
"Nothingness in one's heart...Do you think it's worth it?"

"Finally we can eat!"I said in a loud voice,When my sister thumped me in the head and said."Don't be too loud,
Some people are already asleep Chris.""Fine Fine,Let's just eat."I said in reply.After we ate I went to sleep.
After a few hours my sister kept nudging me.Then I said.
"Argh, Sis, why wake me up now?!" I muttered grumpily to my sister after she woke me.
She clearly did like my question, gave me a kick whilst growling,
"oi Pooface, you better get up or else I'm gonna show you the meaning of 'tough love!"
"Ow!Fine,Let me just get my katana."I replied.We paid the innkeeper some cash then
we went out some time after that then we saw Some soldier pushed a man,after that we saw a soldier burn
a shed.Soon the fire spread.Soldiers have burnt the Village.We had to escape,But no luck,We encountered a
soldier,"Hurry Sis,Let's run already!"I said to my sister Ronnie as she was looking at a soldier."That
soldier seems familiar..."She said."Don't mind him,Let just run!"I said,Then we ran.
Then as we were running,We attracted a lot of attention,So we had to fight some soldiers along the way.
"Not on my watch you!"I said then slashed a soldier."Hey Sis,Did you notice that they keep mentioning a name?"
"Never noticed that."Said my sister in reply as we were running away."They seem to be saying Cath?"They can't actually
be mentioning a dead princess can they?"Then we ran as far as we could,My heart was beating fast.They won't stop
following us for some reason.Then me and my sister ran into the forest,Tired and weary from running,We rested a bit.
"Hey sis,Ever since the death of the princess,Those soldiers are going everywhere...."I told my sister as we were sitting.
My sister was silent.Then she said"I know...But why are they-""There they are!"A soldier interrupted.
"Sis,More of them looks like we'll need to head to the next village,Let's just rendezvous to Gazi Village,Ok?"
My sister gave me a kiss of luck on my cheek and slapped my head as if she were spoiling me again."Good luck Chris,Now Run!"
I ran as fast as I can from the soldiers,Looking at my sister as she was fending off some of the soldiers with the skills our
grandfather taught us.Our grandfather...Who became mad with power...As I was thinking of it,I ran and ran...Then
Suddenly,I stopped to see a bush,Something was moving,I prepared to slash it with my katana,
And when I took a peek,I was surprised.It was just a frog."Phew,I thought that was-"When suddenly another soldier interrupted and
said,"There's one of the escapees!""Escapees?!We never even escaped from anything!"I said in my mind.Then I ran and ran and ran
until I bumped a twig then passed out.Then I heard some noises,Sounded like footsteps,voices and grenades all at the same time.
Then someone was nudging me,In the fashion my sister would."..Ke..Up.."I could someone say that.Then I heard it again...Only now
it said,"...Ake...Up.."Then it became clear,The voice was trying to say "Wake Up."So I woke up,Only to find myself in a cave,With
a woman in a cloak same height as me.Then she said."Good you're awake.""Where am I?"I said in reply."In a cave wherelse?"She said
I was silent at that time then the woman said "You're Christian right?Find your sister Ronnie."I was surprised,She knew my name and
she knew that I had a sister,Then I said,"How do you know my name?And how did you know that I had a sister?""That is nothing
that concerns you,Now,run and find your sister."She said in reply.Then I went out of the cave,Freaked out."Hmm..This place looks
familiar...It's as if I've been here before..."I said to myself.I walked and walked thinking about my sister's safety and how
that lady knew me and my sister.I walked and walked again,Until I heard a scream from the forest,It sounded like my sister's voice.
I rushed and followed the scream.Only to see my sister freaking out from a simple monster,A bug.Then I said,"Sis,It's just a bug..."Then
she said in reply."CHRIS!!!! IM GONNA KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T GET THIS BUG OUT OF MY SIGHT!!!!"I went silent after that and laughed
then I said"Good luck on that bug sis!Haha!!"Then she was really enraged at that time,She suddenly jumped high and bit me hard,
Then slapped my head,Then punched my shoulder."That hurt sis..."I said then she said in reply,"Serves you right for messing with me!"
We went silent after that.Then we just continued to travel to Gazi Village,Home of the deranged necromancer,Renzo.






User Comments: [2]
ll_amethy_ll
Community Member





Sat May 23, 2009 @ 03:37am


whaa dkuh n bsa maxado lhat xDD!! hba kc ahaha..
heart broken tsk..tsk..tsk


Tashimaru Lonewolf
Community Member





Sat May 23, 2009 @ 03:41am


Awesome!! It pwns my story! XD


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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