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Yellow's Precious Thought-bin
7th Period
I was in class, and this amazing inspiration struck me, so I had to get this poem down.

Who are you
Who am I
Who are we
to be
All caught up
and
All thrown down
swirled
in the symphony

Who's to say
Who's to deem
to me
What's right and wrong
To conform
To be each other
yet suffer
my life long
Who decrees and
Who decides
What I should
think
and
act
Yet is angry
if you're imperfect
And shows you
what you lack

I am not
in the script
I am not
a written note
I am what
they do not
count on.
I have what
they wish
they got.

So here me,
all you 'perfect's
all you 'conform to'
and 'belong's
I wander from
what you deem
and am writing
My own song.






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The_Manly_Succubus
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 19, 2008 @ 04:39pm
I really like it.

O.o

It's realy nice and it flows nicely off of the lips (becuase like a dork, I read it out loud. Hee hee hee). It's very... good word choice. I can't quite describe it. ^.^


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