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A SONG I Wrote Reflection in the water Of the moon in a dark sky Stars clouded over When our dreams died Can you remember Our care free days When our eyes were covered in an innocent haze Times of flowers, Times of change Times of cutting loose Bright blue skys, a hundred trys To get this right The veil has been lifted from our eyes We have grown our wings and taken to the skys The dreams awakened one last time This time they wont die And now Its our time to shine and go back to Times of flowers, Times of change, Times of cutting loose Bright blue skys, a hundred trys to get this right And this time Its time Its time for flowers, change and cutting loos Bright blue skys, who needs a hundred trys to get this right this is right this is now! [This is just a first copy..it needs work...and no, it isn't emo HAH....i kinda envisioned someone else singing it, thats why...tell me what you think and what needs to be fixed.....and this was written at 10 pm...just like the leaf poem in my siggy....yeah] There once was a leaf in a tree, When the seasons changed so did he. From green to red to orange to brown, He changed until he hit the ground. There he lay upon the trees root, Until he was crushed by a large boot. -written by Me at 10 Pm...yeah

Posted by: BlazingXeir Wed Jul 16, 2008 @ 01:12am

There once was a leaf in a tree,
When the seasons changed so did he.

From green to red to orange to brown,
He changed until he hit the ground.

There he lay upon the trees root,
Until he was crushed by a large boot.

-written by Me at 10 Pm...yeah

User Comments: [4]

Demon Contractor
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Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 06:13pm

I think it should be like this:

Reflection in the water
Of the moon in a dark sky

Stars clouded over
When our dreams died

Can you remember
Our care free days

Eyes were covered
in an innocent haze

Times of those flowers,
Times of that change

Times of cutting loose
From a world that is strange

Bright blue skys, and a hundred trys
To correct what is wrong

We have grown our dazzeling wings
and taken to the skys

The dreams have awakened
for one last time

This time they wont die
And now its time to shine

and go back to...

Times of those flowers,
Times of that change

Times of cutting loose
From a world that is strange

Bright blue skys, and a hundred trys
To correct what is wrong

And this time

Its time

Its time for:

those flowers, that change, and cutting loose

Bright blue skys, who needs a hundred trys

to get things right

this is right

this is now

Its time for:

those flowers, that change, and cutting loose!

Ta da!!!

BlazingXeir
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Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 06:15pm

yours is good, but the beat is a bit off....and some lines are kinda iffy, we can work on it when i get back.

Dragon Mistress Kat
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 @ 08:08pm

ah so emo lol I heart it

BlazingXeir
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 10:04pm

really? its emo? i thought the begining may be but "time os flowers" is sooo not emo....i was writing it and it started emo then went elsewhere i wrote as i went along......

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